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I know I should be doing commishes, but my tablet is sorta screwed up >.>

So this is a Secret Santa present for ~Princess-Leaf from the group #Secretly-Santa-2011, who hasn't recieved a drawing from her santa ://

So here it is... My first drawing in non-chibi Style XD
Critique VERY appreciated.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Soo.. First off, I think she really looks awesome for your first try! Better than everything I drew, when I still tried drawing manga style... >.>

First the stuff I find a little weird/what you should practise a little more:
- the arms and Hands look a bit too thin/small. Maybe look up some Tutorials for anatomy or so.. It normally really helps a lot. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
- in my opinion, the outlines are too strong. Try using colours, that don't seem so hard. Maybe a darker brown for the outlines of the hair or something like that.

And now what I like:
- the shading. I really, really love it and the girl looks really.. umm plastisch. xD
- how she's standing there. It looks really really cute.

So. That's it. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>